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kebaab

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Just press H. Standard ren'py controls.

I understand your view but I suggest that you at least try to make the ways he reacts to the events in the story a little more realistic as to make him more relatable to the player. So far I only feel the urge to punch him for being idiotic. 
I do appreciate that you took the time to reply and that you take criticism politely. I wish you luck with the project and I'll keep following your progress. 

Played 5 minutes of it and am curious... how old is the main character supposed to be? He acts like he is 10 and knows nothing about anything at all lol. 
Also, what's up with the whole "your parents disappeared and left this big farm for me to take care (and possibly profit of), but I know they are fine because... not telling you." behavior from the uncle? Who in the world would hear that and not have about 300 red flags raised and their phone at hand to call the cops?
I like how the characters look but the writing is not convincing at all. No adult would be that brain dead.  So far it's a 3/5 for me. 

Definitely one of my favorite VNs. Art style is great and the story is very captivating with all characters. 

Call me weird but I wish Doc would come up with some strange way for Yoshi to have Zed's puppies. He is so into having a family I feel kinda sad. 

Ronch's path messed me up... I want a good ending with the giant lol

The middle one is when you win a fight against a bull (flirting) while having 7+ endurance and 40+ lust

Exactly the style I was looking for to use in my project! Thank you very much for sharing this for free!

Oh ok! Thank you :)

I'm missing the last CG and can't find how to unlock it or even what it's supposed to be. Can anyone give me a hint?

I REALLY enjoy Human Cargo. Specially Zed and the Captain paths. It has the right amount of sentiment and kinkiness that suits my tastes haha. I also enjoy Lagoon Lounge and am currently following Tavern of Spear.

The problem with that "feature" is that it renders all the other characters, including the MC, pointless in combat because that one character will one shot every single enemy. It's dumb and boring.

I haven't played Morenatsu Homecoming yet 

As for your question, I don't really have a favorite character because I didn't really enjoy any of the love interests, but if I had to pick the one that annoyed me the least, I'd say Gear or the Bartender dude.

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I really like the concept for this game. However, it has a few problems that bothered me a bit, such as several parts of the dialog having double words (yes, it's a simple mistake, but happens way too many times), the unbalanced battle system where, for some weird reason, one of the characters deal 200 dmg while the others are dealing 3-6, and what annoyed me the most was how I found myself wanting to punch the characters a few times for their inconsistency of behavior. In one moment they are telling you that you can do it and ou are cool and the next they are calling you a kid and treating you like a bother. There's no plot development whatsoever and the fact that the enemies are mostly shown as nothing but a black silhouette even though the MC sees them clearly and describes what they look like, feels lazy. Also, would be cool if the MC actually had a face